Listened to it some times and I must agree that the build up 0:00-1:00 was way too much repetitive, but it still sounded good. Really liked it after 1:40. You should aim for a wider range of sounds or more adaptable sounds to make it less repetitive and boring after the first 5 times u listen to it (LOL). I overally liked it.
Are u planning on finishing it?
Thanks for this!
I don't think I'll ever finish it, maybe one day... If i do, it will be much different.
From 00.00-00.40, that is not a build, that is just the first part of the track.intro...
But I'm glad it grew on you =]
Thanks for the download and the score. I think it fits your review.
I love that melody :D u should stick to it.
Maybe u should stick to the piano until that boom around 0:43 and make it more "boom" since there was hardly a change in the bass even with my BIG bass. Try using the piano for the bigger boom, i hardly notice the one at 0:30. Here's a simple idea, stick with the piano for the 30 secs then start the part of the song that started at 0:43. Try changing the volume and maybe do some mixing to the final part of the song to make it sound more unique.
My review sucks but its like midnight here and im tired :\
The voice at the end could be done better, before the voice starts what sound was that? This could be used in a game, but i don't recommend earing it too much.
You need to work more!
Lots of things to work.
Firstly, NOTHING stands out in the song.
What program did u use to make this?
Its pretty repetitive.
I enjoyed it, but i didn't love it
I used FL10 for this one but I am on FL11 now with Toxic and a few more VSTs
Pretty good song, gotta love that drum at 00:50 for some i liked it, Btw what program did u use to make this? Sounds kinda arcade at some parts. The beginning is wicked, smooth and scary, thou u could have made it last a little longer, since most creepy songs have long scary intros, seems like you'r an exception.
I'm gonna stop wasting your time now, keep it up.
Ill kill u if u don't pm about your new songs ;P
Thanks for the kind review!
Hah, well. The intro was originally twice as long but I decided to remove half of it. The song was above 5 minutes and I just felt like it was too long xD. And well, it's not actually supposed to be that creepy... or so I didn't expect it to be. Just named it like this due to the whisper-like synth I added but meh. Everyone's gotta have an opinion ;)
OMFG, only 96/100? >_< damnit I fail so badly :<.. nah jk xD
I'll promise to pm you about future songs, don't worry about it! Thanks again, and glad you enjoyed the song!
Edit: I used Reason 4 for this song.
Pretty groovy, like the whole song is calm. Made me chill for quite a while.
Its really housy. Its really awesome to walk down the street while listening to this,
your drums might be preset, but everyone uses them. It kinda loops? The goes slow so the beginning of the song somewhat catches the beat and throws the song up again, but that's just my opinion, u're the expert.
I look forward for more songs like this, kinda makes summer come back.
Damn skippy, I love capturing the feeling of a care-free summertime. Makes me happy inside!
But yeah, used rex loops for the hi-hats and other rhythm. Programmed kick-snare though. Once I get the new Record/Reason combo upgrade I'll be doing my drum sounds from scratch since they've introduced a drum synthesizer which I can't wait to play around with. Have been too busy with work to make music lately though! Eep! It's killin' me! :D
The beginning could use some work since i think it starts a little fast, since that high sound could be just some seconds late.
Not to be an ass, and i know ambient ain't your thing, so i'm giving it a 8.
I suppose that would work nicely, a later start. It is a bit quick. I'll see what I can do. Also I think Im going to move that tinging sound that comes in at 0:30 around from ear to ear, for some cool depth.
The is my favorite classical song ever. Ever.
Its smooth and it flows pretty well.
..i think i heard this is church the other day LOL.
The way it loops its soo awesome.
Congrats you'r the first guy to get 2 100 from me on the SAME day <_<
I have a better mix, but since it was used in that tutorial I can't upload it.
Send me a message I can email it to you. ^.^
Fruity loops, my worst enemy, yet you seem to make it my best friend xD
Love the song,but it LOOPS,so you should call it loop.
The sound that comes at 00:28 doesn't really fit
You made yourself a fan.
Eh, it really doesn't but I never saved this.....
So I can't really fix it.
Amazing, these creepy ambient songs are really awesome, the whispers make it sound like a huge deserted city and you look around and you see no one!
Best song I seen from you, still i only checked 2 of your songs.
Keep making more!~
10, XD This is maybe one of my least favorites......
Well, thank you. Maybe if I could have sung this a bit better eh?
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